Sortelli ([info]sortelli) wrote,
@ 2006-05-16 11:47:00
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Thag is beginning to lose his patience
This goes so much faster when I don't color it. Maybe I'll just keep doing that until I got an archive.


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[info]sortelli
2006-05-16 06:36 pm UTC (link)
Man, I wish I had been looking at page 5 when I inked this, I can't believe how much Yates evolved between two pages. Eesh.

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[info]luciusmalfoy
2006-05-16 07:05 pm UTC (link)
I love his face. So much.

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[info]phactorri
2006-05-16 08:44 pm UTC (link)
your line art is getting so smooth Josh.

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[info]escushion
2006-05-16 11:21 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, very smooth lines. And don't worry about coloring; your stuff is clean enough that one can tell what's going on without colors.

Only trouble I see is 2nd to last panel, where it's not exactly clear that the secretary is talking.

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[info]sortelli
2006-05-17 03:08 am UTC (link)
Yeah, I'll probably have to layer the tail of that bubble under Yate's reply.

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[info]netpoet22
2006-05-17 10:16 am UTC (link)
Send me the large sized one, Sortelli, and I'll color it for you. :)

>Net

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[info]hentaikid
2006-05-17 11:40 am UTC (link)
Ok this is a quibble but in the second panel shouldn't it be "ye"? "Yer" just sounds like "your" to my accentometer.

Oh and I just noticed: it's Sheila

Oh shit liaison

:)

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[info]sortelli
2006-05-18 02:52 am UTC (link)
Heh, thanks. I can at least say the "yer" is intential, Thag uses it in place of "you" and "you're/your"

The rest was me not paying enough attention.

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